Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the

Essay topics:

Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Correction mostly loose it values sometimes when it doesn't come from the right source. The prompt recommend that critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless, it comes from someone who is an expert in that field. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the suggestion and argue that critical judgement of work in any field has little value unless, it comes from someone who is an expert in the field for these three reasons.

To begin, judgement is mostly unsuitable art to humanity, nobody wants to be corrected, most especially when the rebuke comes from an inexperienced personality. For instance, in the case when a leader who is totally inexperienced in the field, and have not tangible result of accomplishment tends to correct someone, the correction or judgement will hold no waters, because is coming from a wrong source. Consequently if judgment comes from an inappropriate quarter it will be powerless in it performance for the purpose it was discharged. However as judgement is sacrosanct to productivities, it is powerless if it is not coming from a right source. The above example illustrate how powerless judgement could be when is coming from an unproductive person.

Further, it is generally accepted that people respect result. If judgement is passed from an expert to the subordinate, because of the avalanche of experience that he has, and accomplishment, people tend do received the judgement as a means of enabling them to improved in the way they do thing. For instance, if a teacher who is highly respected by the student in the school, passed a judgement, the student tend to received the judgement as a means of making improvement on the way to study. However if the judgement comes from their fellow students the student will ignore and treat it whimsically.

Finally, people believe that judgement should be based on fairness and must come from the people who are saddled with the responsibility unless the purpose will be defeated. For instance if the president of the country passed a judgement, citizen must follow it, because if they disregard it, it will bring further punishment. However if the nominal person without authority or power do the same, the judgement will hold no power.

In conclusion of course, some argue that anybody can passed a judgement even if the person is not experienced, and it will have a positive impart on the people, However if the judgement doesn't comes from an experienced, someone that is saddled with authority, wisdom, and power it won't have any impact on the people on which the judgement is being passed.

Votes
Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'values'.
Suggestion: sometimes values
Correction mostly loose it values sometimes when it doesnt come from the right sour...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ostly loose it values sometimes when it doesnt come from the right source. The prompt ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any given field has little value unless, it comes from someone who is an expert i...
^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an expert in that field. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the suggestion and...
^^
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tical judgement of work in any field has little value unless, it comes from some...
^^
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k in any field has little value unless, it comes from someone who is an expert i...
^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt is mostly unsuitable art to humanity, nobody wants to be corrected, most espe...
^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...humanity, nobody wants to be corrected, most especially when the rebuke comes fr...
^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the rebuke comes from an inexperienced personality. For instance, in the case ...
^^
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nexperienced personality. For instance, in the case when a leader who is totally...
^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o is totally inexperienced in the field, and have not tangible result of accompli...
^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...accomplishment tends to correct someone, the correction or judgement will hold no...
^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ection or judgement will hold no waters, because is coming from a wrong source. C...
^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... because is coming from a wrong source. Consequently if judgment comes from an inappropriate...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ance for the purpose it was discharged. However as judgement is sacrosanct to productiv...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dgement is sacrosanct to productivities, it is powerless if it is not coming from...
^^
Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om an unproductive person. Further, it is generally accepted that people res...
^^
Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assed from an expert to the subordinate, because of the avalanche of experience t...
^^
Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the avalanche of experience that he has, and accomplishment, people tend do rece...
^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rience that he has, and accomplishment, people tend do received the judgement as...
^^
Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the way they do thing. For instance, if a teacher who is highly respected by ...
^^
Line 6, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... respected by the student in the school, passed a judgement, the student tend to...
^^
Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dent in the school, passed a judgement, the student tend to received the judgeme...
^^
Line 6, column 502, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...making improvement on the way to study. However if the judgement comes from their fello...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ident of the country passed a judgement, citizen must follow it, because if the...
^^
Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ountry passed a judgement, citizen must follow it, because if they disregard it...
^^
Line 8, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d a judgement, citizen must follow it, because if they disregard it, it will b...
^^
Line 8, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ollow it, because if they disregard it, it will bring further punishment. Howeve...
^^
Line 8, column 332, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... it, it will bring further punishment. However if the nominal person without authority...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... without authority or power do the same, the judgement will hold no power. In...
^^
Line 10, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d no power. In conclusion of course, some argue that anybody can passed a jud...
^^
Line 10, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t even if the person is not experienced, and it will have a positive impart on t...
^^
Line 10, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is not experienced, and it will have a positive impart on the people, However i...
^^
Line 10, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...on the people, However if the judgement doesnt comes from an experienced, someone tha...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gement doesnt comes from an experienced, someone that is saddled with authority, ...
^^
Line 10, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... someone that is saddled with authority, wisdom, and power it wont have any impa...
^^
Line 10, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that is saddled with authority, wisdom, and power it wont have any impact on the...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99311926606 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056867842 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435779816514 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9772813535 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0625 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260324844074 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108326547592 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130748352961 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168297312308 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151335721164 0.0667264976115 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.