Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
judgement of a work can literally be done by anyone who is already into the field or outside the field. but when it comes to critical judgement it might be right to consider the opinions of those who's an expert in that particular field. there are several reasons to back this up , and i would be elucidating about the same .
any piece of work or an art takes lot of investment of time and hardwork into it, and thus the individual behind that work would be greatly pleased to know any comments or feedbacl regarding the work of his. Though, the general tendency of many would be expect their work or art to be praised, a relatively equal importance is given to know about the genuine impact that their piece of work has delivered. one might be thrilled to know, how well can he improve upon his practices to make sure to attract a larger group of audience and compliments, the second time he goes to showcase his work. For instance, a novice painter who has painted the first ever portrait in his life would of course feel happy that he was able to paint something that he always wanted to. but at the same time, he would be very much willing to know how well has he been able to paint it, and whether it was able to impress the expected number of people, or whether he did reach his expectations. but more importantly, he would be concerned to know the feedback from his teacher whom he admires and believes to be the critic for his work. that is, one would always tend to rely on a person who is already an expert in the field to get the genuine feedback about any piece of work. And there are many reasons for doing this,because an expert in a particular field is often known to know all the intricacies, drawbacks and other related components of a work,and would thus be able to really appreciate the work correctly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, regarding, second, so, thus, well, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41543026706 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42964006803 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501483679525 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3270940448 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218776885728 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107128379298 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901724330892 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209538481415 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421668433747 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.