Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain

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Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals."

Contemporary life and its Luxuries and conveniences provide pleasure for any being, be it vehicles, instant flashes of knowledge or virtual roaming. It's easy for anybody to get caught in an illusion of freedom and thriftiness.Since mostly everything is just a click away. In fact, I agree with the speaker because it is a little absurd to state that these luxuries are completely harmless.

Consider the smartphone, for example.Most people consider the smartphone a necessity rather than a luxury; yet this very reason that this token of hand-held luxury so aptly supports the speaker's point. We depend on it and the global connectivity it cherishes, so much ,that this prevents us from developing truly independent and strong in character. In some respects, the smartphone serves to enhance such independence. As an evidence,it enervates the burden of validating each company of its proprietary candidates for a business. It helps an individual in completing arduous tasks without any external help.

However, smartphones have diminished our independence in a number of more significant respects.We rely on them like crutches for getting the job done, even for petty tasks.Moreover, it also became attainment of our socioeconomic goals , insofar staged to a symbol of status. In fact , most working professionals are willing to invest a magnanimous part of their savings for holding an iPhone 6 or a blackberry. As the popular video from YouTube ,'Look up' stated clearly, "We are a generation of idiots, smartphone, and dumb people",

Try requesting someone to accompany you for buying an apparel or any other accessory ,the end of the street(or is shopping enough). It's likely you are bombarded with a superficially incongruous reply, advising you to shop online and save time.I am sure of it since my own brother was the person who advised me. A lot of unprecedented and morally abiding incidents could have happened along the way, like meeting a new person or bargaining at the store. So, does this all relay come up to the conclusion that, it depends on the idiosyncratic qualities of the individual.In this case, Is a person is ought to be self-resilient even before having an encounter with these modern luxuries?:that's an impractical situation as technologies wait for nobody. Even after having a superfluous moral education from school and home, studies have cited that the young generation has become slaves to smartphones.

Of course, virtually everyone is in the favor of a more global outlook . Perhaps believing that our society is better off, on balance, with such 'luxuries'; after all, the mobile industry has created countless jobs and made the world more interesting.However becoming slaves to such a dupe entity is embarrassing , as we humans are never born slaves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Since
... an illusion of freedom and thriftiness.Since mostly everything is just a click away....
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... an illusion of freedom and thriftiness.Since mostly everything is just a click away....
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...lobal connectivity it cherishes, so much ,that this prevents us from developing tr...
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...berry. As the popular video from YouTube ,Look up stated clearly, We are a generat...
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... of idiots, smartphone, and dumb people, Try requesting someone to accompany you ...
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...iosyncratic qualities of the individual.In this case, Is a person is ought to be s...
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...is in the favor of a more global outlook . Perhaps believing that our society is b...
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...obs and made the world more interesting.However becoming slaves to such a dupe entity i...
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...es to such a dupe entity is embarrassing , as we humans are never born slaves.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'after all', 'for example', 'in fact', 'of course']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232142857143 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.152777777778 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575396825397 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128968253968 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0535714285714 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17959918957 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218253968254 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00595238095238 0.0016655270985 357% => OK
Determiners: 0.117063492063 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00396825396825 0.0249443105267 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00198412698413 0.0148568991511 13% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2792.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 452.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17699115044 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393805309735 0.366273622748 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296460176991 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20796460177 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159292035398 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17959918957 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 219.290929204 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630530973451 0.48968727796 129% => OK
Word variations: 84.0641919057 55.4138127331 152% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1111111111 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2117760478 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.111111111 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.7571288102 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.55970149254 1.64882698954 95% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307603329131 0.391690518653 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0648871236174 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0369873282775 0.077325440228 48% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496691453872 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145209196143 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117461994151 0.161403998019 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051126250124 0.0892212321368 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283336575322 0.385218514788 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0214739423778 0.0692045440612 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19535950539 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615369262798 0.0653680567796 94% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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