Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve
Government officials are the people who are elected to perform the task which are salubrious for the nation and for the country. The given prompt focuses on how these government officials must put their work up. This is a contentious issue on which some people claim that officials workers must work on their own judgment while some argue that the action of the government officials should fully concern to the better will of the people. In my opinion, action of the officials must be prudent by working on their own judgement without hampering the better will of the common people. So, i mostly agree with the given prompt for the following reasons.
Firstly, experience is what makes people to carry out the targeted plans and actions smoothly. In the case of government officials, they are the people who are working on policy making for the better development of the nation and to uplift the status of the people. Moreover, during the planning process it becomes difficult to incorporate the views of all people. For instance, take the budget allocation process for the development in different sectors by the government workers. If they try to carry out this work in between the public, due to the diverse views the task will be daunting. This examples clarifies the idea that government officials must perform the act on the basis of their past experience with their own judgement.
Secondly, some of the issues of the nation are such that they cannot be discussed among the people of that country and are prohibited for making the news and inculcate people about the ongoing issue. For instance, the security issue of any county. The government of United State of America cannot take the suggestions from the people about the military training, ongoing development on the modern technological weapons and on the strategies to increase the economic issue of the nation. With discussions among the people, all the secret information about the nation will be divulged. This instance shows that it is necessary for the government officials to carry out the actions on the basis of their own acuity.
However, saying this, the importance of the collaboration between the public and the officials cannot be neglected. Government officials are elected by the hoi-polloi to work on the fundamental issue of the nation such as poverty, quality education, health services, and sustainable development etcetera. For instance, take the example of curriculum design for the education institution. In this work, government officials must make synergy among the people from different fields and should carry out the discussion about the best possible solution.
In conclusion, working on fundamental issues of the people, it is necessary to carry out the work according to the will of the people. Nevertheless, experience of the public officials work best on some of the important issue of the nation than the will of the common people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'clarify'.
Suggestion: clarify
...he task will be daunting. This examples clarifies the idea that government officials must...
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Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...t perform the act on the basis of their past experience with their own judgement. Secondly, ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... with their own judgement. Secondly, some of the issues of the nation are such that they...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ce of the public officials work best on some of the important issue of the nation than the ...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion than the will of the common people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10580912863 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70650847022 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392116182573 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4134441064 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.863636364 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305349865548 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992878225609 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760648331406 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190242338744 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455377894963 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.