Every developed as well as developing country engages its resources in research and development in various fields. The output of these research activities is many a times not known which can cause serious damage. I have to partially agree with the author the government must know about the work of the scientific community.
All young people now find the sci-fiction movies quite interesting and exciting. These movies many a times show that the scientific discoveries that go wrong have a very grusome effect on the world. For example in the movie- The amazing spider man, one of the experiment at central lab goes wrong and a monster like creature is created. the creature creats havok in the city and kills many people. Finally the city is saved by the spider man and all is well. Now think if someone does really try to replicate this in real life. How scary that is right, given that our spiderman has not been recruited yet?. Thus the government and people of the country must know what exactly are the outcomes of any research activity and how are they going to affect their lives.
Also it is necessary for the government that all the resources and funds that they are putting into research are not wasted. What if the scientific community tries to make use of the funds for their own well-being. For example, the government assigns a huge amount of money for cancer research. And at the end of two years they come to know that the money was used by researchers to buy office and university equipments and that by far no solid research has been done on cancer treatments. The government and the people are cheated and looted.
However, not every discovery is predicted. Sometimes a scientist starts to find answers to one questions and in between makes many useful discoveries. For example, remember when coloumbus had started his voyage to find India but due to his inacurate compass he unknowing reached a land which is know known as America.Hence, we can never be sure that in research from the point we start we are going to exactly end at a particular known end point. The research usually takes a detour and in between makes many small and significant discoveries.
Thus, to conclude I have to state that the government must have little idea of what the research community is working on and what are its consequences. They should try to keep track with the activities by taking quarterly or monthly reports from the scientists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...ut of these research activities is many a times not known which can cause serious damag...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...and a monster like creature is created. the creature creats havok in the city and k...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...avok in the city and kills many people. Finally the city is saved by the spider man and...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... spiderman has not been recruited yet?. Thus the government and people of the countr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...re they going to affect their lives. Also it is necessary for the government that...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ss he unknowing reached a land which is know known as America.Hence, we can never be...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...d a land which is know known as America.Hence, we can never be sure that in research ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5960328951 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1064912621 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158590895048 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445685308928 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392387942469 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945806232271 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487059708163 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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