Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
In contrast to the argument, I strongly argue that government should place strict restrictions on scientific research and development if the research is going to harm human health or cause severe ethical problems.
Some people may argue that the government should not granted the right to place significant restrictions on scientific research, because the government will only hamper the progress of science with its own ideology.For example, Chinese government prohibited the research on dead body, as they thought it was too progressive.Even more, they demonized those doctors and scientists who got the knowledge from dead body for centuries.People believed God and were afraid of ghost, and the technology was still stagnant, which stop them form the scientists.This is the reason why some people argue that we should not place any restrictions on scientific research and they believed the more avant-garde the scientific topic is the more possible they can prevent form death.
However, as technology has improved rapidly in recent years, if scientists are allowed to research whatever topics they want, human welfare and health may be endangered.This is a two-edged sword sharper on one side.We bring the most powerful into this world.If there is no restrictions on scientific research and development, we may get hurt.For example, COVID-19 is a man-made virus, which means it does not come form nature.It is helpful to learn the construction of the virus.However, it is the explosion of the COVID-19 that make people realize that regulation is still important to scientific research.
Moreover, some research that could potentially raise severe ethical problems should also be restricted.For example, human cloning has always been a controversial issue in the world.While the development of such technology would surely improve the survival rates of humans and prolong human life by replacing old, malfunctioning human organs with new ones, the dignity of the clone would be deprived by the normal human.Here is a big moral question about this kid of replacement .Is the person still the original one if all the organs are replaced?This will bring a several social problem, and the problem is still unresolved now.As a result, the government should also restrict the development and application of such technology.
To conclude, scientific research and development are the foundation of human life, but we should place restrictions on them and should not be sensationalized and exaggerated.This is a two-edged sword sharper on one side. An avant-garde topic might bring attention but at great risk of being wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for example, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44254278729 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15842457084 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 274.008160868 60.3974514979 454% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 371.0 118.986275619 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.1666666667 23.4991977007 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 5.21951772744 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374960272 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209841841891 0.0831039109588 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139530173948 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23725877802 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108222860764 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 14.1392134831 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.8420337079 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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