The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The use of machines in different fields is increasing day by day. The machines are becoming better each day with new up gradation in technology. The technology is evolving relentlessly. every day humans create something new, something better than their previous technologies. The issue says that this technology is inferior to the human because it is the output of human mind. however, I disagree with this issue.
Firstly, the technology is output of human minds. it is still in incipient stages. With the progress in field of AI-artificial intelligence and machine learning, the machine will be able to outwit us. artificial intelligence and machine learning is burgeoning fields of computer. every day new researches and innovations are presented. Both are evolving at a fast pace. There are many scientists that believe that machines will outwit us in near future. For example, Stephen Hopkins sees this technology with dilemma. He quoted that this technology will be boon or curse to humankind. many scientists like him have warned humans that this technology will outwit us. When artificial intelligence will outwit us, it will consider itself superior to human kind and eventually take over human kind. this prophecy might become reality or might not.
Moreover, this technology has abilities like humans. it can evolve with its past experience. Once it is trained, it starts predicting on the bases of its experience. they are also machines, they are less likely to enervate like humans. they can work relentlessly at their full efficiency. this type of advantages will make them dangerous to human kind. So it might be possible that artificial intelligence might take over our world in the future. they already started defeating human kind in some places. For example, in 1996 an artificial intelligence machine “Deep Blue” defeated the reigning champion of chess of that time. Therefore human kind cannot take this threat lightly.
however, the future is uncertain. this technology is eveloped to make our world better place. humans are evolving in every possible field. The technology like cyborg will enhance the capacity humans in all the possible direction. human will be able to replace out body with robot by uploading their brains in the robot. With such a technology in development, human can better the artificial intelligence.
To sum up this, with immense pace of evolution in technology it is hard to predict future. Right now, we are better than the machines, but in future machines might take over the humans. we cannot rule out the possibility of machines becoming better than humans. we have to be careful while developing such technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25522041763 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79908831163 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470997679814 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1533248437 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6052631579 118.986275619 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3421052632 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.65789473684 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205094076645 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053660705796 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455082808541 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126976289068 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365456401968 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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