If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many people are ambitious and have goals that they would like to achieve, some long-term and other goals short-term. A question that many people have to ask themselves is: What they are willing to do in order to accomplish their goal or goals? I will describe two reasons on why I mostly agree with the idea that people should use any means possible to attain a goal.
To begin, more often than not, a worthy goal, is a goal that breaks some type of limit or barrier. Take for example, the civil rights movement in the United States. The proponents of the civil rights movement had many goals in mind, such as, outlawing segregation, voting rights for everyone, and changing the overall perception of African Americans in the United States. The goals of the civil rights movement are worthy goals, because the purpose of the movement was to break social color barriers and laws in the United States. Such laws and social practices were unjust, uncivil, and often times inhumane, and were worth being set right by any means possible.
A worthy goal is also a goal that inspires others to set goals for themselves. The United States landing on the moon is such a goal. Not only did landing on the moon inspire future scientists, but it also inspired others around the world to aim for goals that seem unattainable at first. Goals like landing on the moon should be attained by any means.
However, goals that aim to do harm, sabotage, or belittle others should not be achieved by any means. Hitler’s goal of exterminating Jews is such a goal that nations around the world aimed to stop once the Holocaust came to light. I agree that there are those in the world that wish to do harm to others, and should be stopped. And hopefully, once those who realize that their goals can cause harm, will choose not to pursue the goals, or seek an alternative so as to not cause harm.
It is true, that not everyone has righteous goals that they think are worthy of pursuing and accomplishing. And thus, they should not use any means needed to accomplish those ill willed goals. However, when such goals are pursued, then those who aim to stop malice goals should use any means needed to prevent wrong doing from happening. I often agree that those with goals should use any means to attain the goals, and when said goals are inhumane, then believe that the goals should not be pursued or an alternative goal should be sought to complete.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'land'
Suggestion: land
...n the moon is such a goal. Not only did landing on the moon inspire future scientists, ...
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Line 6, column 459, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ursue the goals, or seek an alternative so as to not cause harm. It is true, that not...
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Line 8, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and when said goals are inhumane, then believe that the goals should not be pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, thus, as to, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31284986046 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446759259259 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7429526355 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.35 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154481443316 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613120874887 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383842678709 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960310382893 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297364731676 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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