Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
People often have different perspectives on the topic that leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them. While some people might say that leaders are truly created by the demands, others seem to disagree with it. In my opinion, I believe the former. The following discussion can reveal my stand and reasoning.
To begin with, the demands of the people facilitate someone to be a leader. To be specific, the leaders are created because lots of different demands from public stimulate the leader. For example, Steve Jobs, who was a leader of Apple. Before he became the leader, people did not know about the smart phone too much, and they did not have the demand on it. After he published the new type of cellphone, lots of people have the demands on it. Steve Jobs eventually became the leader and made his cellphone be such a big hit. Thus, I think the leaders are created when people facilitate them for their demands.
The second point is that the leaders are created by the demands of the people when they have some certain problems. That is to say, when people have some troubles and they do not know how to solve it, The leaders are created at that time. For instance, in my country, there is a company which had a financial crisis last year. Lots of employee were concerned about their salaries. The CEO did not know how to solve the problems and he fired by the board of directors. After few months, a man stood up and provided some strategies for company, and the problems were resolved. That man eventually became the CEO of the company. Therefore, this is a good example that the leaders are created by the demands.
True, some people might say that leaders are not created by the demands since they usually have some special characteristics and cannot be created. However, this belief fools to consider the fact that even the leaders have these different characteristics or knowledge, if they are not the demands by the public or other things, they would not have an opportunities to become the renowned leader. Thus, it is hard to convince people of this idea.
To sum up, with the reasons mentioned above, I think leaders are created by the demands. There seems to be some validity to other points of view. Nevertheless, I still think that the reasons of my opinion are stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Lots of employees
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71078431373 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44822271333 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448529411765 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0060186164 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.88 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.32 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39464212535 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115812968619 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131004166536 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234352795361 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102645455946 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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