Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The claim says that men and women, due to their fundamental physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. I somewhat disagree with this. There are a lot of fields or 'tasks' where men and women are equally contributing . Yes, there are physical differences but that does not stop a woman or a man to pursue what they want to do.
First of all, lets look into the lives of soldiers who gives the pith of their lives in order to serve the well being of their countries. In world war 1 and world war 2, most of the soldiers on the battlefield were men. Why was that? It was due to the same belief that women are not physically stronger, so their place lie in homes where they work to bring up their kids. Or they can just do things like taking care of shops on behalf of their husbands while they serve their country on the battlefield. But in today's world, there are lot of women soldiers who actively participate in the deeds to serve their countries in battlefields and places of unrest alike. Here we can question , does their physical ineligibility does not come in their way of taking part in dangerous endeavors ? The answer is that, these women don't let the boundaries of physical differences come in the way of their will and duties.
Additionally we can see women participating the Olympics every four years. Does their physical differences hinder them from participating. The answer is again no. We know that considering the physical differences between male and female, the Olympics have separate events for men and women to compete. But this does not means that women are not equally suited for that task. It can be even possible that a female wrestler can defeat a male wrestler in the arena, if given the chance.
It is not a question of physical differences but of personal aptitude. A man may be not able to mount the summit of Mt. Everest while a woman may actually do it. The task of climbing the highest peak of the world is same for both men and women, and we can find examples of both males and females who have accomplished this feat and have made their countries proud. Bachhandri Pal is a well known name of a women from India, who has defied all the boundaries of "being a women" and was the first Indian woman to grab this feat.
We can even see the example of Avengers movie and comics, Black Widow is a woman and yet she can defeat Iron man, if she takes on the challenge to actually defeat him. We can even see the examples of these kind of badass women being part of various security services in real life. Many girls in Japan, start learning martial arts from a small age for many different reasons like self defense, interests etc.
So finally I would conclude that even if there are inherent physical differences between men and women, but that does not means it is the reason of not being equally suited for a particular task. If a woman sets her eye on something, with will power and hard work, she can overcome those physical barriers which try to come in her way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e men and women are equally contributing . Yes, there are physical differences b...
^^
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... men and women are equally contributing . Yes, there are physical differences bu...
^^
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g . Yes, there are physical differences but that does not stop a woman or a man ...
^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of soldiers who gives the pith of their lives in order to serve the well being o...
^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to serve their countries in battlefields and places of unrest alike. Here we can ...
^^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es of unrest alike. Here we can question , does their physical ineligibility does ...
^^
Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...ion , does their physical ineligibility does not come in their way of taking part in...
^^^^
Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...avors ? The answer is that, these women dont let the boundaries of physical differen...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...in the way of their will and duties. Additionally we can see women participating the Olym...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tween male and female, the Olympics have separate events for men and women to com...
^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...and women to compete. But this does not means that women are not equally suited for t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aptitude. A man may be not able to mount the summit of Mt. Everest while a woman ...
^^
Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
... Bachhandri Pal is a well known name of a women from India, who has defied all the boun...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...achhandri Pal is a well known name of a women from India, who has defied all the boun...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... feat. We can even see the example of Avengers movie and comics, Black Widow i...
^^
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...at him. We can even see the examples of these kind of badass women being part of various s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rning martial arts from a small age for many different reasons like self defense, interests et...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like self defense, interests etc. So finally I would conclude that even if th...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242122719735 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.1592039801 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0646766169154 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514096185738 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.06135986733 0.0444667217837 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126036484245 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0348258706468 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44776813993 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199004975124 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0016583747927 0.0016655270985 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.0928689883914 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248756218905 0.0249443105267 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3048.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 552.0 452.878318584 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.240942028986 0.366273622748 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.173913043478 0.280924506359 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139492753623 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0670289855072 0.132149295362 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44776813993 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 219.290929204 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.9735285089 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7142857143 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.041449656 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.1055900621 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.48170731707 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450576950906 0.391690518653 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0949718644324 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0730745867092 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489845162822 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17480228135 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152660604441 0.161403998019 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868397577751 0.0892212321368 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296269735082 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0489156349109 0.0692045440612 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287791914602 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657039538659 0.0653680567796 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.