Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

men and women have, as the statement suggests, inherently different physicalities. this statement is true for many tasks. Therefore, I am in agreement with this statement. Along with different physical strengths and weaknesses they also have different ways of approaching to certain problems. so, for some tasks only men will be suited whereas for some other tasks only women will be suited. this can be justified with some examples.
it has been observed that mostly male species have more physical power, so for carrying out any activity that demands intense physical strength men are preferred to women. For example, while building construction in many developing countries (like India), it is mostly observed that men carry a pile of bricks on their heads from the truck to the construction site while women are mostly delegated works that require less physical strength. As anyone can imagine, carrying a pile of bricks on head is a very tough job and can be physically challenging.
Another example can be that of a mechanic's job. Around the globe it is observed that mostly men are engaged as mechanics because it also requires physical strength more than most of the other jobs.
These examples suggest that in most jobs where physical strength is required men are preferred to women as employees. that is not to say that any job that a woman can do can also be done by a man.
For example, most Obstetricians are females because helping in baby delivery is a very delicate job which does not require immense strength, if anything, it is quite the opposite. Since women are, mostly, less powerful than men, so it is a suitable job for the females.
From the above examples it is quite clear that different jobs require different physical strengths. so in conclusion, the statement that men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks, is, according to my opinion, very much true with regards to most tasks. so I agree with the statement.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94658753709 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65935969673 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489614243323 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.8207326003 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373428406875 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11498773811 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13638518817 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194896604074 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116541208671 0.0667264976115 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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