Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position

Every living creature on the Earth, including the human being, has an equal right live a prosperous life. Each living organism plays a vital role in the contribution towards maintaining a ecological balance on Earth. In such conditions, no one has given humans the right to appropriate the land ares which are the habitats of other creatures.

Wilderness areas are full of immense varieties of flora and fauna. For example, Amazon forest shows a wild diversity of species, right from the insects to a giant animals like Anaconda. This is possible because of suitable area, right climate and most importantly no intervention of humans. Also, all the species illustrate a vital role in the biodiversity and even in food chain. Like, insects are eaten rodents, rodents are eaten by snakes and snakes are eaten by Mongoose and vultures. In this way the balance is maintain by nature on its own.

Nature has everything for a man's need but not for a man's greed. In the past few years, the population of humans are growing so rapidly that the area on which they are living proving insufficient to them and they starting intervening the areas provided for other species to live. People are using the wilderness areas for their own settlements likes building apartments, factories and thus appropriating the land which does not belong to them. This ultimately disturbs the balance of nature which gives rise to disastrous situation like Global warming. As per the analysis by NASA, the temperature of Earth increased by two degree celsius in the past decade and if we still ignore the situation then this will become worsen.

Furthermore, imbalance Earth's biodiversity has a direct effect on the living of human beings as well. Some of the harsh results are ambiguous climatic condition, water scarcity, rise in the temperature, infertile land. All these are the outcomes of the lame decisions taken by human for their comforts.

Strict actions need to be taken to lower these harsh effects and revert the condition of Earth to its stable state. Moreover, People tend to follow the procedures on a mandatory basis if it is documented by law. Relatively, if a law is passed to preserve the remaining wilderness areas in their nature state then people are accepted to follow it and thus help in the betterment of the Earth's current condition. In addition to this, to preserve the wilderness areas, intelligent decision of building the national parks will also help the nation economically.

With all this aspects, I surely support that a law should be passed by nation to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state which not only help the living creatures to live their life without any disturbance but also maintain the ecological balance on earth.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, as for, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02603036876 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70922247356 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518438177874 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8035066939 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.318181818 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9545454545 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259351776398 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695917308389 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723833995179 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137548970694 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880360349249 0.0667264976115 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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