As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Over the past few decades technology has increased rapidly from smart phones
wireless devices to self driving cars. people tend to rely on technology to solve
problems. human thinking ability will not deteriorate though they rely on
technology for the following reasons.
Primary reason being humans rely on technology to solve mundane or simple
problems so that they can focus on much complex problems. This makes their li
easier. For instance a business man who runs a store spends around eight hours
his time on calculations. he could instead use calculating software to reduce his
time spent on calculations and utilize that time on making complex decisions to
make his business more succesful, hence it is evident that ability to think will nc
decrease due to relying on technology.
humans need to solve new problems and enhance their thinking to create new
technologies. creating new technologies brainstorms people. In order to get new
ideas and implement new technologies one has to think a lot. people like Elon Mus
have invented new technologies like self driving cars which involves many
complex ideas. so technologies help people to improve their thinking capabilities
in the process to make new technologies.
technology answers many unknown questions. For instance a student who has
limited access to resources and wants to know about space science. he cannot
explore about it. but due to technology like internet and computers he can learn
about space science.
technology helps to connect people which in turn enhances the exchange of ideas
between people. it helps to connect with people all around the world. For instance a student from a underdeveloped place can reach out to a professor at a different
geographical location. connecting with people and communication improves the
overall thinking ability of humans.
Though few argue that technology impacts students badly. but looking with the
broader perspective it does not affect them. Taking all the reasons into consideration
technology instead of deteriorating the human thinking capacity it would enhance it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he overall thinking ability of humans. Though few argue that technology impacts stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45317220544 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85085300199 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3156556178 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4782608696 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3913043478 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95652173913 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.97078651685 563% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357691485624 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931704857068 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906373692745 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883490646051 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08319608715 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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