People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos

Napoleon Bonaparte once said- "While making any decision always think 100 times before implementing it. Nevertheless, once it is implemented, do not think of changing it." It is a generally observed aspect that people who often do not think substantially before acting have to remorse later. I am therefore in complete accordance with the stance that irrational decisions framed with logic later are consequently remorseful.
To begin with, numerous examples can be quoted from history which prove the given stance. A striking example is of the war of 1857 in Indian history. When the East India Company had established there near to full domain on Indian ground, a for revolt had been planned. However, despite of the involvement of strong warriors like Rani Laxmibai, Tatya Tope, Mangal Pandey, Etc. in the mission, the mission proved to be highly unsuccessful.Undoubtedly, the decision of overthrowing the foreign rule was based completely on emotions and not on logic.
On the contrary, freedom obtained by India on 15th august 1947 is thoroughly a fruit of thorough decision making skills. Various discerning minds like Jawaharlal Nehru, Mahatma Gandhi, etc. put their logical decisions forward in co-operation. They made a plethora of appeals proposing India's independence to the British Government. Although, the British condoned these non-violent actions at first, the patriotic hearts were still undeterred. Various Satyagraha movements were started. Later, slowly and steadily in 1946 the British finally submitted to the never-say die attitude of the Indians. Thus, although it may take ample amount of time, but a plan should be always backed by rationality.
Nonetheless, it is sometimes essential to take a decision without rational basis. For instance if there is an outbreak of a war the people who stay very close to the war area have no option but to abscond from the region for safety reasons. They can later rationally fetch a shelter. In such cases, one can say that the stance may be undermined.
In a nutshell, it can be concluded that if a person does not look before he leaps then he is most likely to have a fall unless he is backed by his stars.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14887640449 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99240901966 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1091683061 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2857142857 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174162255899 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431085140149 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551698926468 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810651758952 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484831330252 0.0667264976115 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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