People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In life ,decisions and choices we make are the most important part of our lives. It shapes the future of an individual. A person who applies logic to every decision he makes is called a practical person while a person who makes decisions based on emotions is an emotional person. Well, I believe people making decisions based on emotions can be poor decisions makers sometimes.
Emotions come directly from the heart while logic is purely based on mind. Now some people apply their hearts while some their minds in their decision making process while some apply both-heart and their minds. Many a times, a situation arises where you have to be practical instead of being emotional, and if a person takes decision emotionally, he/she might have to suffer its consequences for a long time. Discipline is must while taking a decision. For instance, every mother loves her children. But if she takes decision from her heart and keep pampering the child, the child won't become a responsible and knowledgeable person. She has to be stoic sometimes to make the child believe that the life can be unfair at times and he has to work hard and be disciplined to get things.
Although, there can be times where a person taking decisions emotionally can help him. Like we all have seen the movie Pursuit Of Happiness based on a real life. In that movie, how Will Smith helps people like for instance giving his boss a $5 for his taxi, In spite of not having enough money, but he never refuses. In return he gets threefold of what he gave by getting a confirmed job in the company. In case of Mahatma Gandhi who brought independence in India, it all began when he was told to sit on floor in South Africa. His emotional decisions to free India has proved to be a great decision for the millions of people in India who are now independent and free.
Therefore, i believe many a times taking decisions emotionally and helping people out always seems a poor decision in the beginning but soon its results are too great to be reaped ,if applied properly. The situation and the problem to be solved matters greatly. The emotionally based decisions at right times will always result in making a person good decision maker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73126614987 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52973291836 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514211886305 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4540830698 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.55 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25756387635 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842977949828 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809922319688 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186053201262 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641069228999 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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