People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

One of the most significant stride for any task is the decision taking mechanism. If the decision taken about the problem or task whatsoever, it can initially predict the result. Therefore the success in any solution based on the perfection in decision making, and it should not be influenced by emotion rather than logical thinking.

Being a rational being, human has their intrinsic characteristics to approach any challenge they face. In this regard, they always should contemplate thoroughly, considering all the pros and cons of their decision to finalize that. Devoid of this fastidious analysis, all the efforts made afterwards can go to vain. For instance, all the scientific invention heretofore has been resulted from the rumination and thoroughgoing analysis of every aspect of an experiment. In this case, however erratic the results were, if the scientists, otherwise came into conclusion from heart, the ramifications would not be same. It would be just another hypotheses generated from their heart, not any perfected conclusion. Therefore, rational thinking should always pervade.

Moreover, medical science also bolsters the claim of logical thinking rather than driven by emotion. A poignant doctor can never be successful in his practice if he takes every decision on emotion basis, perhaps even, he would exacerbate the patients existing condition. In reality, a doctor must be stalwart in his thinking, performing every task punctiliously rather than emotionally. Likewise, in corporate world, every business mastermind has taken their decision on market basis, not according to what their heart said. Consequence of the opposite cause would not be this modern globalized world.

Nevertheless, we can not deny that we should sometimes make decision from our heart. There are cornucopia of circumstances where it prevails, as such, our relation problems, our family problems. Although, we should not let emotion drive us always, sometimes it helps us wonderfully. A scion of a family has to decide whether he will abandon his parents after he turns eighteen or not because of fulfilling his dream - considering his parents turned feeble - a hard choice to make, for example. There are similar cases in our surroundings which we have to solve emotionally.

In short, lauded as the most intelligent species of all kind, we should, therefore, definitely choose our paths, decide anything not just on mere emotional thoughts, rather than reasonable thinking.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47532467532 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94024602802 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0508782266 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.380952381 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124384552366 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377910250679 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387088955091 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746696347056 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503688443232 0.0667264976115 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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