The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Music is a form of art. Art is a field which is very subjective. In art, a thing that someone likes could be abhorred by other.Similarly in music a song loved by a person would not be so likeable to another.The point that the author is trying to make that real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead.I disagree with this view of the author as people with real talent will always get recognized in someway or the other.
Firstly,it is generally observed that people believe in what they see.The best way to appreciate or criticize something is when you see it live.After the death of a person, the only way to analyze his art is either by reading something about him or by watching his videos.The musicians popularity can easily be judged when he is alive by taking some poll or survey about it.Moreover when the musician is dead we will never be able to study about the nuances that led to the evolution of that music. The experiences ,knowledge and the personality traits of a musician can coherently be understood when he or she is alive.
Secondly, every person is born with some talent ,we as individuals should strive to recognize that talent and work hard towards it and someday we will surely gain some success. Fame and popularity are directly proportional to the quality of work.Even if a musician is famous at a point and then the quality of his music degrades his popularity will soon decrease, but someone who always works hard towards his goal might initially not gain success but surely someday he will. For instance, A.R Rahman he is a renowed indian musician who started from nowhere ,had no connection to the music industry and today he holds one of the most prestigious award in the world i.e The Oscar for his work in Slumdog Millionaire.This shows us that with preserverance and humility we can achieve great heights.
Finally,people might argue that in todays digital world, due to a huge influence of media in our daily lives musicians are made famous by massive PR stunts instead of their actual music quality.There are a few examples to prove this point, but this examples are far and scarce.Even those examples fade away after couple of composition and albums and are forgotten even before they die, leave alone their work being appreciated by the coming generation.
In conclusion,every person possess unique talent.In the field of music this is prominent and the real talent can be accurately assessed from the work of artist and not by the fame which he or she achieves.Real talent will always find its way over the ephermeral fame and no matter what, life or death cannot articulate its value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80172413793 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74135220112 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.859438257 60.3974514979 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.8 118.986275619 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291851443051 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104299733627 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099612663751 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158769766752 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900720979183 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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