Scandals have been a part of almost every field. They involve shocking, immoral or illegal behavior of people which is not acceptable in the society. Because of their immoral nature they raise different extreme feelings and reaction amongst people.
A scandal is therefore a problem generated in the society which becomes a concern and issue for a large section of the society.
It is correct that we learn by making mistakes. It is only with experience of dealing with difficult situations that a person becomes wiser and practical. The problem forces you to try all the possible solutions and you come up with a permanent and lasting solution. Therefore, there is increased number of chances of not repeating it again. This type of learning that comes by actually committing mistakes lasts longer and you will never forget it. However, if you prepare for a problem that you might face in future, you are not going to pay as much attention to it as you pay to the existing problem.
When the problem takes shape of a scandal, there are more people involved and affected by it. The feelings and sentiments of people are affected and finding a solution becomes all the more difficult. It disrupts the peace, law and order of a place. It becomes very important to take control and find a solution of such a situation. Hence it becomes the thing of utmost importance for any leader to bring back the situation of peace.
This task is also done by reformers and speakers. However, the difference lies in the fact that reformers spread morally and legally correct practices while in a scandal the leader practically struggles to find a solution. It is human nature to give more importance to the existing problems rather than prepare for a problem that you might face in future. Then comes the question, "Is the solution found for an existing problem better than that for a problem that one might face is future?" It may not be easy to answer this because the practicality of a solution is seen only by practicing it. However, the work done by reformers cannot be ignored. It is but for them that a society holds its morals and values.
We can then understand that scandals and existing problems are useful for us in a way since they help in focusing our attention more towards the problem and its solution. However, who takes up the responsibility of the situation? Considering that it involves a large number of people, a solution cannot be found out unless all or the majority of people are willing to find a solution and comply by the rules. A leader alone cannot find a permanent solution. Therefore, it depends upon the attitude of the society as a whole to look at the scandal as a common problem and not remain divided over it. This is where a reformer steps in. He unites people by teaching morally correct and good values. It is only by his teachings that a change can be brought in the thinking of people and a lasting solution be found by the authorities.
Conclusively, it can be said that the scandals definitely focus our attention towards the problems but a solution to the problem is found only when the attitude of people concerned is reformed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...epare for a problem that you might face in future, you are not going to pay as much atten...
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Line 6, column 333, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nd find a solution of such a situation. Hence it becomes the thing of utmost importan...
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Line 8, column 346, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...epare for a problem that you might face in future. Then comes the question, Is the soluti...
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Line 10, column 260, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...situation? Considering that it involves a large number of people, a solution cannot be found out ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198003327787 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.174708818636 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.063227953411 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0665557404326 0.0497285424764 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0665557404326 0.0444667217837 150% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131447587354 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0515806988353 0.0406280797675 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61533597751 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216306156406 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00499168053245 0.0016655270985 300% => OK
Determiners: 0.1231281198 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018302828619 0.0249443105267 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116472545757 0.0148568991511 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3165.0 2732.02544248 116% => OK
No of words: 554.0 452.878318584 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71299638989 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361010830325 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285198555957 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180505415162 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0956678700361 0.132149295362 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61533597751 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431407942238 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5610265927 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8709677419 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8239786306 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.096774194 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8709677419 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.387096774194 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 46.3908233376 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.23783783784 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295599326036 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110846526547 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107630065533 0.077325440228 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507630244523 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191430425664 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103518946622 0.161403998019 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723990551583 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360096127901 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133525610203 0.0692045440612 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188697916116 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428956615203 0.0653680567796 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.30420353982 339% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 16.0 3.66592920354 436% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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