Science is meaningless without religion.
Surely many of us believe that everything in this world are interconnected.As it stated that science is meaningless without religion undermines many situations.I would agree rely on the context of interconnection between the two divergent theories.Many of the modern day experiments were carried out based on the empirical practises and formulation.Some inventions give cogent results until a old belif or fact is applied to it.This stimulates the task and various conclusions are drawn from it.There are many examples that reflects everything has its own ancient mechanism and hypothesis.
Firstly,consider the example of religion hindu which is present in India where there are many potentials that relate to science.In villages, every household lawn is spread with cow dung which erradicates insects like mosquito,flies etc coming into the house. Scientifically,it has proved correct. And the other thing which plays main role and acts like antibiotic tarmaric powder is used when one is hurt,it prevents heavy loss of blood flow.
Secondly,in the feilds of drugs that used to heal many diseases. Some of the medicines are derived from anciently held procedures.In olden days there were no such advanced medicines to cure diseases in that case many used home remidies, available herbs etc.Modern druggists use some of the empirical formulas and deployed the advanced drugs.
Science, is interconnected with the religion in direct or indirect manner.Even there may be many advanses in science and technology one should not neglect their religion,old believes. Afterall the whole universe is the combination of everything one should balance between the science and religion
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252707581227 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.191335740072 0.157235817809 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126353790614 0.0880659088768 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.028880866426 0.0497285424764 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216606498195 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108303249097 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.043321299639 0.0406280797675 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1739908016 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.014440433213 0.030933414821 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00361010830325 0.0016655270985 217% => OK
Determiners: 0.0830324909747 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014440433213 0.0249443105267 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.028880866426 0.0148568991511 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1674.0 2732.02544248 61% => OK
No of words: 255.0 452.878318584 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.56470588235 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396078431373 0.366273622748 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337254901961 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.254901960784 0.200843997647 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176470588235 0.132149295362 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1739908016 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.48968727796 135% => OK
Word variations: 76.3187834902 55.4138127331 138% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 31.875 23.380412469 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 164.344151098 59.4972553346 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.25 141.124799967 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 23.380412469 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.674092028746 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.6004901961 51.4728631049 127% => OK
Elegance: 1.67164179104 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2065028976 0.391690518653 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13677312762 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0999488962337 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.703047314805 0.547984918172 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.23449899251 0.149214159877 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102054746848 0.161403998019 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883214474856 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245164396816 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0391953875235 0.0692045440612 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143542283393 0.275328986314 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928996482743 0.0653680567796 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.