Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
we need to maintain ecological balance balance " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">in nature. humans should have primary responsibility to save our planet and all species. There is a famous saying 'Prevention is better than cure' meaning we need to act before it is too late for us to realize. While the statement to save only endangered species is incorrect, as a citizen it is our duty to save save " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">each and every species.
human intervention is primary reason for all natural calamities like earthquake, global warming, ectectra. For example, using electronic equipments like air conditioner, refregirator results increase in carbon dioxide in air and as a negative negative " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">consequence, the atmosphere temperature temperature " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is being increased which makes living not only human as well as animals difficult. due to rise in surface temperature, frozen bodies of glaciers, which are habitat to numerous sea creatures, starts melting keeping these species at risk of extinction.
moreover, due to industrialization many trees, which acts as sheltor and food for herbivorous, are being chopped just to raise standard of living of human and this inturn results in soil erosion, sudden change in weather and disruption in ecological balance. For instance, recently we have witnessed wild fires in amazon reinforest and in australia, which resulted in greater loss in proportion of trees and animals. As a negative effect, more and more animals are entering human habitat which will be a greater risk to each other. In many parts of India, we have seen cloudbursts, glacier bursts which have resulted in flood and lost many lives.
In conclusion, we should act early in preserving nature and its species before before " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">its too late which which " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">inturn helps in maintaince of ecological balance. human should care for all species, particularly those which are at the edge of extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93333333333 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.10973812913 2.79657885939 147% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.295422513 60.3974514979 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.461538462 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116878657625 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551700545959 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470177317471 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800391334978 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213090559733 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 12.1639044944 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.