Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Surely in every community, the ability of cooperation in the memebers of that group has a key role to keep that community together. This capability is much more essential for the leader of the group as a role model and a person who should be able to manage the members and provide a cooperative condition for them. But as much as the sense of cooperation is important for a leader to hold the group together, it is also important that the leader has the sense of competition to raise the position of the group, which could be a government or an industry among their commpetitors. Sense of competition is a stimulus for any group to be outstanding and it is important for the society not noly to prepare its young people to be cooperative with their counterparts but also competetive in a productive manner.
Nowadays, one of the big markets belongs to electronics and intelligent devices such as laptops and smatphones. In this huge market one important feature for a company to be successfull and spacially for its leader is how competetive they are otherwise in such a market soon they will be eliminated. For example, for a long while, Nokia had the first rank amongst companies who were manufacturing cellphones. No one thought that one day that position will be shaken and replaced by another companies. This goes back to a good understanding of competitors in the market and having practical plans to overcome them. In this situation, for a leader of a company, the moset important thing is to be competetive and induce this sence also in its memebers to they would be able to keep up the growth of the needs and expection of the consumers and defeat the other companies and save the position of their company. Here it is indisputabe that a leader shoud be cooperative for each element of the compnay but this is not adequate for the highest achivments.
The example expained above, can be mirrored in any other groups as major as government. A successfull leader in a government, is the one who can compete against other candidates in the election and gain his position. Also even after elections, a country is also like a cellphone company. The strength of each govenrment is related to their economy, army and etc. to be able to be a successfull governor you should also know your competitors otherwise your economy will fall and your army will be defeated in a possibe wars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ative condition for them. But as much as the sense of cooperation is important fo...
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...their counterparts but also competetive in a productive manner. Nowadays, one of the big markets...
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Suggestion: Also,
... in the election and gain his position. Also even after elections, a country is also...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...rment is related to their economy, army and etc. to be able to be a successfull governor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75779376499 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88593744454 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458033573141 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9182177821 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273601227186 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909241235916 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718322633325 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197861776418 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322676650902 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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