Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests
when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of
a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should address both of the views presented.
In today's era when everyone and everywhere there is lot of options to explore and research.So in education , there is multiple choices for today's students .If we talk about the college when students comes out his shell from school and stupilate choice of course , with he/she wants to proceed , by that choice their future depends.
Nowdays, when after completing the college, students are still exploring their choice of future , whom they have passion and see them in that profile.I believe college students should consider their own talents and interests ,in which they wants to proceed their college.It prepares them from scarth and give the full guidance from the start. By having the choice in their graduation will let them explore more options and have knowledge.
We have seen many shows/competition like cooking, dancing, singing and fashion designing etc.Many proceed into it but many many fails because lack of knowledge.Many students like engineers are well known actors and singers.The knowledge that they had given their college don't seems to be useful in their carrer.Where we have seen there is multiple colleges provides the courses after education like in cinema,fashion designer etc which we have heard a great people in world became superstars because they are molded and got every as aspects known from start and keep their passion lighten.
At the end i want to say people should consider the colleges subjects as per their talents and interests.So that student when they are evolving , they will face all the right path and no lack in the knowledge when it needs.
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... to explore and research.So in education , there is multiple choices for todays st...
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... explore and research.So in education , there is multiple choices for todays students .If we talk about t...
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...s multiple choices for todays students .If we talk about the college when students...
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...ve passion and see them in that profile.I believe college students should conside...
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...ich they wants to proceed their college.It prepares them from scarth and give the ...
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...cing, singing and fashion designing etc.Many proceed into it but many many fails bec...
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...ny many fails because lack of knowledge.Many students like engineers are well known ...
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...neers are well known actors and singers.The knowledge that they had given their col...
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...ledge that they had given their college dont seems to be useful in their carrer.Wher...
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...ep their passion lighten. At the end i want to say people should consider the ...
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...ects as per their talents and interests.So that student when they are evolving , t...
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...s.So that student when they are evolving , they will face all the right path and n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14671814672 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58711566617 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.046005778 60.3974514979 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.6 118.986275619 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 23.4991977007 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259449956646 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155484540374 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748848216715 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172897755733 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057961336708 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 14.1392134831 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.8971910112 223% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.