Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study.
Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
In college life, it is very imprtant to persue any subject that actually he or she liked. Every student has own choices and none of all students expert were the same field. it is typically disputed that student should choose their focal field basis of their
own interest and talent of particular field regaredless availability of jobs in that feilds. However, I personally believe that students
should persue their subject in the college on the basis of their talent. I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the
following essay.
To begin with, passion helps to find out succes and helps to long lasting. we are know that some people doing batter, if they persue their own choices field,
Although it is sometimes happening that people like pursue some field that actually carry values the present time but people do better if they are better in their favorable field.
For instance, now computer engineering is a highly demandable subjects and all over the world, CSE jobs are available now but i like to biotany and like to find out pathogen very much.
most of the time i want to spent my time in labrotary for research puposes. Although, it is sometimes appear unconving that why i enroll botany , though CSE is highy valuable but i think that
my own interest field bringing y success and most importantly i liked that.
Secondly, jod field are not constant and always changes in short duration or long duration. every students should concern and trying to knowing what is now demandable besides
what would be happen after future. Because many time happened that one field is very demandable one time but suddenly collapse after few years. It would be happen that when some one take any subject for basis of market demand but after his or her
graduation this subject are lose their demanded and decline their demand. For example, in bangldesh after severel yaars ago textile was a very demandable subject .so student like to choose textile but after ten uears later now
textile sector already collapse as a result textile graduation no needed number of engi that needed before time . so this is very unconvincing for a student , if they like to choose
any subject besis of market demand.
Finally, Although most of the people like to pursue demandable subject those are provides job availability and after then sometime it also happening that people does not bringing any success in this field.
becasue limitations is a primary obstacle for getting any success. for instance, In CSE always need to up to date and needed technological advanceces. If someone purse this
subjet without knowing prooperly they can not bring any success.according to the daily star report on lsat month although jod scope are increasing but the skill manpower decline almost 30 percent.
In conclusion, from the above discussion, i assert up the students should condsider their field basis pf their own interest and talen rather condires job availablility.
This is because it is helps to bring their succesful career and provide secure their job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 28.8173652695 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 2260.96107784 115% => OK
No of words: 515.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04854368932 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5205118487 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 204.123752495 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48932038835 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 705.55239521 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4124014218 57.8364921388 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4090909091 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95454545455 5.70786347227 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 5.15768463074 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.25449101796 685% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354794239384 0.218282227539 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109566689032 0.0743258471296 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127481161493 0.0701772020484 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126570264579 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113696307254 0.0628817314937 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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