Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of the corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The responsibilities of the corporations to promote the well-being of the societies and the environment in which they operate, i.e. Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) is although not something ordained by the law but is definitely incumbent upon them as ethical responsibilities by humanitarian aspects, I believe. The reason being the moral obligation that one has to return the nourishment received from one's milieu, the positive group effect that would catapult the charity, and the baseness of being a solipsist and mercenary life.
When we were born, we were in a feeble state. We could not help ourselves but it was our surrounding through our parents that nurtured us. It provided us with the amenities like parks, public libraries, inculcated social and cultural richness in us. When we grow and become capable enough to provide our support to the milieu that made us the way we are, a negligent attitude would be a cowardice's act. It is the moral call that we must give back to the roots that nourished us. And this is the way human race progresses ahead in time. An allegory for this could be the leaves. The Huge long trees nourish the leaves with water and food and once it is autumn, the leaves wither and fall to nourish the tree that once nourished it acting as a fertilizer to engender the growth of new trees. Since the corporations when huge are financially strong, therefore they must contribute to the welfare of their surrounding people and environment, not only monetarily but by their time and physical strength too. This would upgrade the impoverished section as well as help bridge the gulf between the rich and poor in the society.
Indian poet 'Maithilisharan Gupta' in his famous poem 'Manushyata' qualifies a person to be called human being if he or she is only concerned about himself. He attributes selfishness to be an animal instinct. Like an animal only cares about filling his own stomach and nothing else. It is very base to be living such a solipsistic existence. Therefore, we must care and nurture the society to inculcate in us the human aspects.
In sum, corporations must responsibly contribute to the society to feed their conscience and shed positive impact upon each other. This would prevent them from being self-centered and become more empathetic.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207637231504 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.152744630072 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.090692124105 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525059665871 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0859188544153 0.0444667217837 193% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0859188544153 0.12292977631 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0310262529833 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87667441876 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334128878282 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114558472554 0.0997080785238 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238663484487 0.0249443105267 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238663484487 0.0148568991511 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2303.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 386.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96632124352 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334196891192 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256476683938 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194300518135 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134715025907 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87667441876 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 64.0314956547 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0669781923 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.15 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.35 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 44.9476683938 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.11475409836 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.579421388052 0.391690518653 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0960876129609 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068687559074 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493159898112 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161098932824 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190780326103 0.161403998019 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158799183877 0.0892212321368 178% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346999341408 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.151550238896 0.0692045440612 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359974200454 0.275328986314 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188876579545 0.0653680567796 289% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.