In this contemporary world, art works have the massive roles to play in bringing out each and every kind of emotions from its audience. Each and every artist in this world spends a part of his/her life time in order to give life to the work that they do. Such an arduous work cannot be simply priced for money as it is priceless for it’s fantastic characteristics. But, in this world of technological advances where there are various other forms through which one can put forth their emotions, the art works are left slovenly henceforth making the art work rare in this current period of time. Hence, the government, in order to rejuvenate this art, has to fund in it in order to preserve the skill for the posterity.
Since the ancient ages, painting is the tool by which man made a mark of his existence. Many of the cave paintings found depicts the culture and traditional aspects of men that lived in that age. But, man by developing himself as the most intelligent animal on the planet, here he is in an era found out his genesis via these art works itself. Such skill has to be carried on for the coming generations. In order to do so, government has to step in to solve few problems. For an instance, lets assume a particular art work of the painter now a days is being waved off by people thinking that it is just few strokes of brushes that put into slight better manner and it requires superficial amounts of tasks and is a loiter. But, when that particular art work is observed by the dexterous eyes and if the government supports it by funding the art work, people certainly will come to know the importance of the art work.
Some of the are works are really priceless. In the modern world, people are interested in something called as the modern art- the art work in which the artist puts forth what’s in his mind completely neglecting the aesthetics to most of it’s extent. But, still there are certain proportions of brush strokes that he maintains in his art. Such beautiful works are priceless. But, the art work has to be shown to the world that it exists. In order to do that one has to fund it. If some one produces the good music, then the organizations fund on them to bring them up in to the crowd. Similarly, the paintings too need to get in the minds and hearts of people with the help of government support. Hence, it is not the point that funding kills the integrity of the art work rather it makes it known to the world by the strength what a piece of paper with proper brush strokes can earn.
There are few aspects where the funding in the art works may go wrong. Now a days, for the sake of greed, one can steal the paintings and sell it to the government in order to gain illegally. There might also be a fake works which may not be perused by the dexterous eyes before the exhibition where it gets sold for millions of dollars. But still, if proper and strict propaganda is followed in order to revive this art, then the aspect of funding gets to become successful.
In a nutshell, the funding on the art work is necessary in this contemporary world because of all the other advanced fields that compete it. The main aim of the art work being to bring out emotions from it’s audience. But there are many elements in this world already like social media that does the same task. Hence, to save this rustic and the most fascinating skill for the posterity, there is a need of funding by the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in this world spends a part of his/her life time in order to give life to the work that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, similarly, so, still, then, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2832.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 634.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46687697161 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45923890345 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438485804416 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.0 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7073720053 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6551724138 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8620689655 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65517241379 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274503856866 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821906091295 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607778656651 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182732440083 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351582509488 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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