Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
In the present situation of the world climate change there is a lot of requirement of reducing the consumption of energy. The people of developed nations mostly belive that they need to reduce their consumption of resourecs. By reducing their energy consumption it might lead to a better global climate. Since the industrialization the earth has seen a drastic change of climates, which is the major problem for earth. This could only be controlled by reducing the consumption of energy or finding other methods to improve the climate.
One of the major cause of climate change is air pollution. This causes the eaths atmosphere to change. The major cause of air pollution is from industries and vehicles. The internal combustion engine, which are present in most of the vehicle produce CO2 which a very effevtive cause of air pollution. Due producing of CO2 the earths ozone layer is also being effected. It is the duty of humans to cure this problem or not cause more trouble to the present problem. Hence, most of the citizens belive to reduce the energy consumption.
We humans should adapt new methods so that we can improve the climate of earth. Most of the developed nations contians fewer population then developing contries, if these developing country citizens also start to belive to reduce the energy consumption then it would be more effective for the climate to change. For example, we take a country like India which has about 1.6 billion population in which about 50 million own a vehicle which produces CO2, if these 50 million citizens of India convert or adapt to electric or other methods which would not harm the climate then its would be really effetive in reducing the climate changes.
It can be concluded by saying that there is really a requirement of changing of methods and adapting to newer and efficient methods which whould not harm the climate or change it. There is a great scope for techonological advancement needed for bringing the climate into control.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun requirement seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of requirements'.
Suggestion: a lot of requirements
...on of the world climate change there is a lot of requirement of reducing the consumption of energy. ...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...air pollution. Due producing of CO2 the earths ozone layer is also being effected. It ...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s which would not harm the climate then its would be really effetive in reducing th...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for bringing the climate into control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9494047619 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68289168789 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.7919988105 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251463940956 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882214303993 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725881795547 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164060186341 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920400097242 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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