Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
In todays changing and mordanizing world, technology plays the vital role in our life. Elder people believe that the excessive use tech reduces human's interaction ability. On the flip side the updated versions of science facilitate us with better and fast ways of communication. The technology have given us both bane and boom. Overuse of devices are curse for humanity, on the contrary side it helps us to thrive in various era. I would say that the use of technology should be done for limited time and for a valid purpose.
To start with, we are surrounded by different technological equipment in our life. The main and main tool is mobile phone. In our routine life we use this equipment for majority of the time, and many of people become addicted to these devices.The core purpose of the mobile phone is to connect easily with people on call. There are many useful features in it, but there are many useless applications are being found of mobilephones.These applications consume our golden time for some trivial purposes like gaming, entertainment and photography etc. I would say that, the use of technology in the right direction makes it worth.
Next, The increasing use of technology causing isolation from the real world, people have more inclination towards the virtual world in compare to the real world. It will ultimately increase procrastination in people. the inclination towards the technological devices cut their creativity, productivity and imagination, also the intellectual abilities of human. The humans always finds easy ways to complete their work. The people are becoming addicted to the technological innovations. The overuse of mobile phone had weaken their relationships with people. Rather than connecting with the world on the virtual world they should connect to their loved ones.
On the other hand, The mobile phone is a multitasking device which is very useful in our routine life. It makes things easy for us like maps, banking , camera, sound recording etc. ultimately, the science is helping us to flourish in various fields. the finding of the internet and mobile phone have made our life easy and so we can connect to any person in the world at speed of light. it is also helpful in the remote locations.
To end, I would say that the technology is the double-edged sword, there are both pros and cons of it. The limited use of it helps us thrive and help us to keep up our interacting with humans.
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...communication. The technology have given us both bane and boom. Overuse of device...
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... purposes like gaming, entertainment and photography etc. I would say that, the u...
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... in the right direction makes it worth. Next, The increasing use of technology c...
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...ely increase procrastination in people. the inclination towards the technological d...
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...icted to the technological innovations. The overuse of mobile phone had weaken thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, on the contrary, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83272601007 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498783454988 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1504861546 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.44 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352669638182 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908030966087 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564849345463 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193006374627 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660434814836 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.