Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns

We are seeing now moral science subjects in primary education. It is important to have moral education in primary education. But also, it is also important to have logical reasoning also its place in the foundation of the education. We will discuss advantages and disadvantages of both today and will reach to the conclusion with proper reasoning.

Moral values are very important in any person's life. Moral values makes a person's character. So moral science should be inevitable part of the modern primary education syllabus. It gives the person ability to think before taking any action. Children having primary education are at the age where they can easily be persuaded by anyone. At this point, children should able to think whether what he/she is doing is morally correct or not. Morality gives children perspective to judge any thing that they come across that if it is correct or incorrect. It may happen that due to learning morality, children will give this perspective to their friends also. This may prevent some children falling into traps and save their careers. So it is very important to have moral science subjects in primary education.

On the other side, some people think that children should also taught logical reasoning to have a better moral society. This is also true to some extant. Morality tells you what you should do and what you should not do. But it does not talk about the question why. Logical reasoning gives the reasoning behind the moral values. Logical reasoning answers why this particular action is logically incorrect. So it is good that children also have logical reasoning as part of the primary education. It will create a good impact on children and it will take the moral value intact in children's mind.

Now let's discuss what should be the ideal scenario. Children should be taught both morality and logical reasoning. But it should be in proportion. There should be equal balance between logical reasoning and morality. If you give logical reasoning more emphasis then moral values, there may be a case where children can misinterpret some things. Let us take an example of poor boy.This boy is not able to afford new school bag. And now he is jealous of other children because they all have good bags than him. Now, if he thinks logically, he may think of snatching any other child's bag. Because this is logically correct. But it is incorrect to steal something from someone. So, moral values are also as important as logical reasoning. Both should be the part of primary education and both should have equal proportion.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hink of snatching any other childs bag. Because this is logically correct. But it is in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94239631336 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49877648499 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433179723502 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3310434982 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0882352941 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249559902728 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759184446853 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598912119409 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172342268208 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517776683976 0.0667264976115 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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