The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The status of any nation is represented by the welfare of it's citizens.
The prompt hints the aforementioned idea whose credibility holds true and need not be ascertained.
I strongly agree with this prompt for the following two reasons.
The rulers, artists or scientists may be a small sample size of the gigantic overall population.
Thus, it makes no sense to juxtapose the two disproportionate samples and extrapolate findings from the smaller sample.
For instance, Jamaican athletes are globally recognized and well known to dominate the 100m and 4x100m sprinting in the Olympics,
however, that does not mean that Jamaica as a country is economically better than the other countries.
Athletes are maybe 10-15% of the general population and therefore cannot be represented as a whole.
The above example ascertains the idea that when representing a nation, a minority sample cannot be representing the entire population.
Furthermore, the primary purpose of the nation is the care and welfare of it's citizens.
If a nation fails to uphold the same, then any other accomplishments would diminish it's value.
The nation's best recognition would be the general welfare of it's people.
For instance, Germany is known for it's advanced infrastructure, free education, cheap healthcare which
is primarily aimed at serving its citizens. This makes Germany an globally recognized nation and above all, an
ideal place to live in.
This example reiterates the idea that the government or the nation should be for the people.
However, some might entertain the idea that achievements are necessary to one's image and they should not be discredited.
That being said, one ought to factor in the concept of ease living and friendly policies as well.
What might be the use of Gold Medals and Nobel Prizes if 50% of the population of the nation are living below the poverty line?.
There might be additional metrics to determine the rankings of nations such as GDP, currency value and so on.
But in my opinion, the welfare of its citizens supersedes everything and should take primary relevance above all else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nations the best
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..., free education, cheap healthcare which is primarily aimed at serving its citize...
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Suggestion: a
...erving its citizens. This makes Germany an globally recognized nation and above al...
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Suggestion:
...ally recognized nation and above all, an ideal place to live in. This example re...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...idea that achievements are necessary to ones image and they should not be discredite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89070692373 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1604611056 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249820664116 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851287966353 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914735498403 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779980288724 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897088469714 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.