Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
It is important for students be focused on their long term goals. But it is more important for the student to be all-rounded and have all the tools to cope up with whatever life throws at them. So, it is imperative for a student to have adequate knowledge about all facets of study.
Expertise in the field of business and science requires a lot of hardwork and perseverance.The field of buisness often delves with studying the organizational structure of a corporation, management of a team and learning to communicate with individuals in an effective manner.
The area of science involves the study of both natural and man-made phenomena like Computers, Electronics, human body, distribution of minerals in the Earth's core etc. Humanities encompasses various domains such as study of behavorial aspects of humans, human psychology ,mass media communication etc.
Knowingly or unknowningly, humanities plays a pivotal role in business and science. In case of buisness, it is important for a person to understand how to deal with their peers and perceive behaviours changes exhibited by their peers so that they can respond in an appropriate manner. That knowledge can be derived from various branches of humanities.
In case of science, innovation is the objective. It is important to understand the needs of people to innovate and devise feasible solutions that will benefit all classes of the population. As humanities helps in understanding the human psychology, it is plays a pivotal role in implementing scientific concepts.
The real-life example of Mark Zuckerberg can be considered for this. He was a major in Computer Science minoring in Human Psychology. Due to his genius level intellect in Computer Science and understanding of people(due to his expertise in Psychology), he was able to invent Facebook which eternally changed the landscape of social media and its role in shaping the mind of modern-day people.
Mark Zuckerberg is the perfect example to show how good scientific knowledge blended with a modicum of humanitarian and business studies can bring about a landslide of change in the society.
Hence, it is important for current generation undergraduates to take up humanities along with their majors in business or science to become a well-rounded individual.
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate manner" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35068493151 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1811676095 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6932242373 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.882352941 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18202316954 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607907313412 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479339095733 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825143377523 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493500323717 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.