To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

Issue that was mentioned above is the important for the society.The topic is to understand the characteristics of the society one must read the major cities. This is the main problem with the today's society that they are thinking that majority of the people are migrating from the village to cities but, to study the characteristics of the society one must read the village.
The people leaving in the cities most of the people are younger people they don't know the way how our tradition is.A another important thing should keep in the mind that majority of people are migrating to cities for the jobs only because of the busy sheduled life the won't be in the mood of following the traditions and they won't have the time to explain to the next generations.
A our freedom fighters Gandhi said that Villages are the roots of the society.we all should aggre for that and w all know te facts of our villages.now a days in this busy life the people who live in the cities are thinking that festivals are the days where we get the time for rest from our busy life and relax or to refresh their minds only. Then how can we accept that to study the characteristics of the society we must read the cities is not the correct statement to justify.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48672566372 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49626551678 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4674565529 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.8 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.2 23.4991977007 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14397127802 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100097628492 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065074212398 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105987711938 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655479533006 0.0667264976115 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 100.480337079 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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