To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The statement states that for understanding the most important characteristics of a city, one must study its major cities.This statement is a contradictory one but the pros in favour of the statement outweigh the cons, hence i agree with the statement.
The statement talks about understanding the characteristics of a society. Cities are the essence of a society and understanding these cities give a much clearer view of what the society looks like. Cities are where all the major development of a society is concentrated. All the major educational institutes, the major infrastructure developments,educaional and medical research, major hospitals, a major portion of the working class of a society, etc are situated in the city. Understanding these aspects give a much more clearer picture and help understanding of the city.
A city always gives a diverse population. As we all know, people from smaller towns migrate to cities in search for job, money or maybe even because of some other reason like education or some medical reason. This eventually leads to people from all parts of the society and people from all walks of life living together in harmony in the cities. Understanding these cities and is people, will lead to getting to know the society much more intimately.
Although, nowadays a majority of the cities have become cosmopolitan leading to generalization even though the cities consist of a very diverse group of people. This being stated, it is also believed that the true cultural heritage of a society will always be found in the small towns or villages where people lead a simpler life.
In conclusion, although the smaller towns and villages are where the cultural heritage is preserved, for truly understanding a city and for getting to know the most important characteristics of the society it is essential to study and get to know the cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26077993093 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478827361564 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4248783425 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.090909091 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430520964212 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154618453589 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968771941526 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2239530234 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990726591991 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.