Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
University policies differ from pursuing interdisciplinary studies to circumscribing the students inside their own field of study. Which method would be more effective for education? It could be debatable but I think that letting students experience numerous fields of study is a better policy for universities.
To begin with, the importance of multidisciplinary perspectives is being emphasized by spotlighting a number of venerated celebrities outside of their primary field of study. For example, Jane Jacobs is one of the world’s most famous urban theorists in the 20th century. She was originally a journalist, but when she got interested in urban design theories, she could be a successful urban theorist with her capacity of multidisciplinary thinking. There are multiple more examples such as former German prime minister Angela Merkel, who was originally a physicist, and Dr. Ahn, who studied medical studies in the university and then became a famous software engineer in South Korea.
Furthermore, comprehension of other majors leads to a successful collaboration with other experts. Most of the occupations require to cooperate with other people; in most circumstances, the other people come from diverse educational backgrounds with different majors. With obscure understanding of other majors, we wouldn’t be able to effectively communicate with the colleagues and might excuse us for misunderstanding.
Of course, there can be some people argue that focusing on their field of study to grow the students’ expertise. On the other hand, I strongly claim that undergraduate studies need to be focused on building a capacity to think deeper and wider, rather than on growing expertise. To grow expertise, students can study further in graduate schools. But to think deeper and wider, the students need to take variety of classes including philosophy and humanities.
In conclusion, I believe that universities need to give attention to provide education of variety of fields. Because many famous features have shown the importance of interdisciplinary thoughts and it can lead to a better cooperation with others after graduation. Even though growing expertise is valued in higher education, for undergraduate level, taking various courses is more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cooperating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cooperating
...xperts. Most of the occupations require to cooperate with other people; in most circumstance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61560693642 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3291648956 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4480957491 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.294117647 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212504635863 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706559172458 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401129150084 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113208131787 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513850435712 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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