We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We become a successful by taking better decision. Better decision in terms of before taking any crucial step think about their different circumstances, their pros and cons. And then sum of all the points and makes a most suitable and profitable decision, which helps you to become a successful in life. We can make our decision more accurate by contradict it rather that support it. Therefor we can learn much more from people whose views contradict our points rather than from people whose views we share.
Innovative ideas and accurate decision more helps you to bring a step in any stage of life. If we contradict our own ideas before take into the action that bring to help, otherwise your important views become a lessen either is benefit for general welfare. For example, one biggest failure views of Indian prime minister Mr. Narendra Modi, that change the Indian currency of 1000rs. and 500rs. notes with new 2000rs. and 500rs. But this whole essential steps take because of bring out hidden "Black Currency". But before taking this essential decision they not contradict own views and put into the action. Because of that instead of thrust out black money occur adverse effect. Most of black money change into white money and complete failure occur in this economical revolutionary idea.
Contradiction of own views create points where our views become weaken and we need to consider that views and change it. Contradictory view may try to discourage you and your things. But in the long time that thing helps to perform extraordinary task. "People always tech from own failure" people whose views contradict our own views make, that pressurize us to think again on our decision and try to figure out make it more efficacy. Therefor our evolutionary views become successful.
Therefor from sum of all the points we can says that always makes essential decision by considering different circumstance and opposing our own views. That contradictory views can help to you make important decision in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e Indian currency of 1000rs. and 500rs. notes with new 2000rs. and 500rs. But this wh...
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...00rs. and 500rs. notes with new 2000rs. and 500rs. But this whole essential steps t...
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...dict own views and put into the action. Because of that instead of thrust out black mon...
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...r evolutionary views become successful. Therefor from sum of all the points we c...
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...refor from sum of all the points we can says that always makes essential decision by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 19.5258426966 5% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11676646707 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65896752263 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479041916168 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9092891116 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.45 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391337164866 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106002370159 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116416093094 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258067162514 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100240206232 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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