Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for t

Young people are the future of any nation. People who have gone through an era, building themselves and working for the betterment of the society, look forward to the young generation and expect them to take the nation forward from there.
The younger generation, especially the teenagers, however, is neglected and forced to follow the dreams of their guardians. A classic example of such beliefs can be observed in India. For example, it has become not less than a tradition to pressurize the students to select a particular field, regardless of what his/her ambitions are. It will be surprisingly not odd at all to say that, in Inda, according to a survey, three out of four boys will be engineers and two out of 4 girls will be doctors. This practice will not only decline the progress of a nation but it will also reduce the efficiency of an individual. A person who is not interested to work in a particular field and if he does not enjoy that work he is doing, it will not give better results. It is because he will not be giving his full potential.
On the other hand, if we ponder upon the pool of thoughts of the younger generation nowadays, many of them prefer to accept the success and settle for it if they achieve it early. Looking at the pot of gold as a result of their initial efforts, they tend to accept it as the zenith of their dreams and not follow their actual goals in life. If you truly want the bread, then you will have to passionately work for it more and not settle for the bread crumbs.
However, it is acceptable to change the goals of life with time. Every child dreams to become some or the other thing in life. Be it an engineer, a doctor, an astronaut or a researcher. But, as you grow older, you get to know things better and you start craving for something different.
Succinctly, it is not the worst decision to change the goals of your life as long as you do not settle for something of less worth. It is always better to achieve something you really wanted and be successful in that. In the end, you don’t want your kids to complete your dreams just like what your parents did.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44501278772 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46780407902 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511508951407 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3563300533 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4736842105 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176366173267 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548754453801 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487966175714 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104936368495 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478063868422 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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