The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart gives information regarding the comparison of amount of money that spent by four big countries in Europe for six pleasure items : personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys, and photographic film.

According to the chart, Britain spends the highest amount of pounds sterling for all six consumer goods among European countries in chart. The highest spending, more than £ 170,000 , is for photographic film. Meanwhile, France becomes the second highest spending for CDs, toys and photographic film, buth this Eifeel country has the lowest demand for personal stereos, tennis racquets, and perfumes.

Italian people have the highest purchasing for toys with the amount of money spent by Italy is same with France, just below £ 160,000. Among 4 countries in graph, German has the least purchasing in overall item with the lowest spendings are for CDs and photographic film. However, tennis racquets become the most popular item for German people and £ 150,000 is spent by this country for this item.

To sum up, it is clear that each country has noticeable different habits in spending money for six consumer goods.

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