the chart below shows the world s energy use in 2010 Global breakdown of energy consumption 2010

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the chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010. Global breakdown of energy consumption 2010

The chart shows the proposition or the percentage of energy consuming for as global breakdown in 2010.

The biggest source of power was petroleum. It produced thirty nine per cent; then, natural gas and coal consuming produced each twenty three per cent and twenty two per cent as sources of energy. And, there were eight per cent of nuclear electronic power and seven per cent of renewable energy; moreover, it consisted of numerous fuels. They were biomass in which its percentage was fifty three per cent and consisted of wood and straw as well as it was as the biggest source of renewable. And, the second renewable fuel was hydroelectric. Its percentage was thirty six per cent. Next, the percentage of both solar and geometrical was same that was five per cent. The last source of energy of renewable was wind. It produced one per cent as the smallest fuel.

In short, even though there was renewable energy, it was still smallest source of energy by means that the biggest fuel of global breakdown of energy consumption in 2010 was petroleum.

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They were biomass in which its percentage was fifty three per cent and consisted of wood and straw as well as it was as the biggest source of renewable.
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