Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

Arts and freedom are two things that always count on one another. Artists work freely without caring too much at some restrictions existed. This condition is in contrast with the government’s regulation which does not allow them to have no limitation in expressing their ideas. Government takes this policy seriously by making some regulations that prohibit artist to have full freedom. Let us take pornography law as an example. The government uses this law to keep artists in the track as they wish. The government thinks that this step is essential to do in order to save the morality of the young generation. Norm and social values are two things that always become their main considerations to place this policy in the proper place.
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However, many artists get stuck toward the existence of this policy. They tend to have no idea when they should make a form of work of art with some limitations around. That is why they keep on doing some demonstrations in order to stop the application of that policy. They keep arguing that there will no great art works as long as there are rules in it.

Regarding this issue, I realize that the government has done a deep thought on this. The government thinks that it should be all people’s responsibility to own young generation that keep applying norm and social values of the country, including creative artists. They think that creative artists should take this restriction as a form of challenge to conquer. By having that mindset, artists will no longer have in contrast opinion on this issue.

Personally, I think that the government has done a great step by giving such limitation. Like any other group of people, creative artists need to get some restrictions in life. Instead of taking it as a barrier, they should make it a task to complete.

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