Crimes and imprisonment

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The only way to cut the crime rate is build more prisons and make prison sentences longer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

In today’s world people are often deplored by the surge in crime rates. There are lot of reciprocal arguments cropping up regarding length of the stay in penal institution and the expansion of their accommodation. In my view point,there are lot of alternatives to be enforced in order to reduce the number of crimes committed.

First of all, corruptions must be categorised based on the severity. Rudimentary antisocial behaviours can be settled without the litigation. For instance, a campaign has been enforced by the Youth Criminal Justice ...

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Sentence: The only way to cut the crime rate is build more prisons and make prison sentences longer.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and build

Sentence: First of all, corruptions must be categorised based on the severity.
Error: categorised Suggestion: categorized

Sentence: It saves the general populace from the cold-blooded murderers.
Error: cold-blooded Suggestion: cold blooded

Sentence: Delinquents are given education and psychological support inorder to leave behind the past and adapt to the society on releasing.
Error: inorder Suggestion: in order

Sentence: This inturn help to reduce the repeat offenders.
Error: inturn Suggestion: in turn

Sentence: In a nutshell after analysing all the afore mentioned aspects, I would like to reiterate that, the increasing time Span of imprisonment is not an ideal remedy to decrease the malfeasance.
Error: malfeasance Suggestion: No alternate word
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