In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?

In most countries lack of student behavior may cause to some severe problems. Mainly this will occur because of the lack support from the parents and teachers.

Firstly, In today`s world most parents are busy with their jobs. Most probably they don’t have enough time to spend with their children. Furthermore they were unable to provide good customs, behaviors and habits to their kids. As a results of that children may attracted to computer or to television where the bad things and the good things telecasts. Although their parents are not with them, there is a chance for student to think wh...

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Sentence: As a results of that children may attracted to computer or to television where the bad things and the good things telecasts.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a conjunction, subordinating
Suggestion: Refer to of and that
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and attracted
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to things and telecasts

Thus it is highly recommended them to spend
Thus it is highly recommended for them to spend

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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.595 7.5

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