Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fro

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Every parent at the current moment has realizing that the competition for a job is increasing significantly, this reason brings the parent to think as best as possible to prepare their children with the best skill to compete for a job. One of the most important skills that should be prepared is the foreign language. Minimum a child must be able to speak a foreign language, because it will be a beneficial skill for him to apply a job in outside his home country in the future. Some experts consider that teaching a foreign language for children since them at primary school is better than start i...

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Some experts consider that teaching a foreign language for children since them at primary school is better than start it at secondary school.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?

Sentence: Primary school is the place for children to develop their character, as we known that the first duty of a primary school is building character not skills.
Description: The fragment we known that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace known with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive

At this age, the children are still need a lot of time to play
At this age, the children still need a lot of time to play

teachers not need to focus on the character building anymore,
teachers do not need to focus on the character building anymore,

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