The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK between 2010 and 2012

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The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK between 2010 and 2012.

The bar chart illustrates How many of students study computer science at a UK from 2010 to 2012.

It is clear that, the number of British male and female students were much higher than that for international male and female students in each of the given years.

According to the bar chart, in 2010 39 of British men students study Computer science, while the number of British women students was lower,at 33. The figures for international men and female students were nowhere near as high as that,at 20 and 14 in turn.

After decreasing substantially to just under 25 in 2011 the number of British male students rose considerable to 43 at the end of the period. Between 2010 and 2012 the figure for British female students increased significantly to 45. Turning to international men students, the figure improved gradually to 23 in 2012 before reaching to a peak of 39 in 2012. Finally, in 2011 the number of international women students stood at 18 before climbing marginally to 20 at the end of the period.

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