The chart below gives information on the age of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.( ielts book 9 test 3)
The pie chart describes the total proportion of three distinct age groups, from birth to the elderly years in two nations Yemen and Italy in 2000 and following period 2050.
Overall, the data figures depict an enormous erratic trend in both countries through each age class. Firstly, when comparing Yemen from 2000 till 2050, the proportion verifies unstable trend. In 2000 the group of 0-14 years shows half of the population. But, its future prediction decreased significantly over one-third (37.0%). Conversely, 15-59 years adults in coming prognosis will be higher by 57.1% than 2000 which was 46.6%. However, senior citizen population in Yemen almost constant over the period.
On the other hand, Italy statistic reveals a diverging pattern of alternation. Italian old age residents in 2000 decreased significantly by 24.1%. While, the following forecast demonstrates the swift rise to 42.3% comprehensively in 2050. Nevertheless,in 2000 teens and adults portion increased drastically by three-fourth. Moreover, in 2050 it's expectation will slight fall up to 50% approximately. Beside this, the young group children in 2000 was 14.3%, while their future numbers will also be declined slightly by 11.5% respectively.
In short, the overall date delineates that Yemen and Italy natives in diverse age batch will be unpredictable comprehended.
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1. In 2000 the group of 0-14
1. In 2000 the group of 0-14 years shows half of the population. But, its future prediction decreased significantly over one-third (37.0%).....
2. Nevertheless, in 2000 teens and adult portion increased drastically by three-fourth. Moreover, in 2050 it's expectation will slight fall up to 50% approximately.
Sentence: In 2000, 0-14 years batch percentage half 50.1.
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