The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia

Essay topics:

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

Two bar graphs elucidate the information about the percentage of Australian men and women and different age group watched either the reality shows or the game shows.

Most age groups watched more reality shows than the game shows; as a result, the reality shows are more popular. 70% of female favours in the reality shows, which is almost twice as many as men. More than 70% of Australian people (regardless with the gender) with over 45 years of age, watched the reality shows and people aged 35 to 44 followed closely (just below 70%). As age goes down, the proportion of watch the reality show decreased; age group of 25 to 34 of 60% and age group of 16 to 24 of just above 50%.

Larger portion of male preferred to watch game shows than the reality shows whilst female watched slightly fewer game shows, but both proportioned at 60%. The game shows are popular especially the age group of over 45 years (70%) whereas other age group showed lower than 50% - 50%, 40% and 30% for 16-24, 35-44, 25-34 age group, respectively.

It is apparent that, women tend to watch more television than men. Despite the types of TV programmes, over 45 age group watched the most.

Votes
Average: 8 (67 votes)

Comments

and different age group watched either the reality shows or the game shows.
and different age groups who watched either the reality shows or the game shows.

the proportion of watch the reality show decreased;
the proportion of watching the reality show decreased;

The game shows are popular especially the age group of over 45 years
The game shows are popular especially for the age group of over 45 years

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2

------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 208 200
No. of Characters: 916 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.798 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.404 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.279 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.504 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.706 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4