The digram shows the life cycle of silkworm from its birth to becoming a math. Overall, becoming a cocoon from the date of a silkworm birth is a long run process and it would last between 57 to 76 days.
The first chain illustrates that after producing eggs, it takes 10 days that the moth eggs become silkworm larva, and at the same time, the nutrient source of this creature is mulberry leaf. Furthermore, larva needs 4 to 6 weeks to build approximately 80% of its silly house by silk thread. It lasts between 3 to 8 days that a cocoon is completed by larva, and after 16 days the moth hatches from the cocoon and it is time for producing eggs.
The second graph, is about producing thread from cocoon in order to make clothes. The first step is cocoon selection, and after this step, cocoons are boiled in a hot water for the next step preparation. As figure illustrates, each cocoon can make between 30 meter to 900 meter thread in unwinding process. After the third step, by twisting and weaving the threads, they are taken to the last step for dyeing and threads can be dyed either in twisting step or in weaving step as the figure shows.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'hot water'.
Suggestion: hot water
... after this step, cocoons are boiled in a hot water for the next step preparation. As figur...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...trates, each cocoon can make between 30 meter to 900 meter thread in unwinding proces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47393364929 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35005150513 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9416240698 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0609851193568 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357460763533 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490467121198 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514480149852 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400085652102 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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