Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures Improve memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time Apply in writing to write a letter give some background information about yourse

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Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time.
Apply in writing to:

write a letter.

.give some background information about yourself
.explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
.enquire about the methods
.enquire about course fees and dates

Dear Sir or Madam

I have seen your advertising about a memory course. Accordingly, I need such a course to overcome with my memory problems.

But there are somethings about me to be noticed. In our family, we have the memory problems and my grandparents and my cousins, have this problem too, although they are not so old. Nowadays, whenever I want to do something, I do not remember what I were going to do, and actually it is so frustrating for me. Sometimes my colleagues criticize to me for my delay of works. Besides this problem I take care from a little child, hence it can be dangerous, because I have memory problem and I may not remember what I had to do.

I need your courses, but I do not know anything about that and the quality of it. So I am going to enquire some questions: I want to be assured about the methods. So how do you accomplish the course? Please explain in detail. And the last concern is the booking time and actually the fees and prices for the courses. How much do we have to pay for? And when is the date and time of the course?

Yours faithfully.
Mr.A

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