The following maps show the changes that have taken placed in the centre of a town since 1700 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The following maps show the changes that have taken placed in the centre of a town since 1700.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the development of the town centre today compare to it in 1700. The general overview here is that although there have been many changes, the market square, the church and the bridge stay unchanged over hundreds of year.

To specify, the hotel, which is next to the market square, now has been expanded from one building to two buildings. The number of shops, which is opposite the market square on the High Street, also has increased from 3 to 5. Besides, the fields and a house, which was near the shops have been gone to give the appearance of a large super market and tw...

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compare to it in 1700.
compared to it in 1700.

which is opposite the market square
which is opposite to the market square

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