A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear Mariana,
Your letter has come. I hope that you and your family find my letter in good health. I hear that you want to spend your vacation in the UK. There is one great place that I want recommend to you. One year, I went to that place, it named Lochinver and the located was in North West of Scotland. That place was very amazing. But if you want to go to that place, is rather away, because you need around thirty miles from the north coast.
If want to spend one night, do not worry about lodging in there although just a few places. In the center town, you are able to find the Kirkaig hotel and the Assynt hotel. There is a campsite too but just outside town. When I went to Lochinver with my family, we stayed at the Kirkaig hotel. But I suggest to you for prefer the camping area because you like keen campers.
In good weather, there are a lot of activities that you are able do in beautiful beach, a golf course, in the fishing and in the fantastic hills, you can see graceful scenery. But when you are in bad weather, you can go to a small cinema in town to take some board game.
Usually, in the hotel, they serve about British food but sometimes they present some of the Scottish Food. Many variety of the food which is you were able to find if you camp.
Well, I have to pick up my children now. For more information, you can send me a letter again.
Regards,
Anita
Sentence: I hope that you and your family find my letter in good health.
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Sentence: If want to spend one night, do not worry about lodging in there although just a few places.
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Sentence: But I suggest to you for prefer the camping area because you like keen campers.
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Sentence: Many variety of the food which is you were able to find if you camp.
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