How greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun

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How greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun

The diagram shows the process of greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.

In general, process heating of the earth caused by decreased population of trees, so that adsorb of carbon dioxide more decline.

Firstly, the process of trapping energy is from the sun by greenhouse gases. It can be seen, the general process deal both with trapping heat by greenhouse gases and the generation of extra carbon dioxide, from burning fossil fuels. The natural heat process begins with the energy produced by the sun which is arriving on planet Earth. At this point, energy partially returns in Space, being reflected directly off the atmosphere by clouds or by Earth’s ground. Despite this some energy, in form of heat, is trapped by greenhouse gases and remains on Earth’s atmosphere.

Finally, the practice of cutting trees brings to worst atmospheric conditions, considering that trees directly contribute to the process of absorbing carbon dioxide.

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process heating of the earth caused by decreased population of trees
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so that adsorb of carbon dioxide more decline.
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Despite this some energy, in form of heat, is trapped by greenhouse gases and remains on Earth’s atmosphere.
Despite this, some energies, in form of heat, are trapped by greenhouse gases and remain on Earth’s atmosphere.

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