The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
The graph tells about the percentage of CO2 to using for dissimilar vehicles of transportation in European Union; meanwhile, the pie chart gives information the proportion of European confederation spending on diverse things by transportation.
According to the data, the percentage of carbon dioxide is flying by air to become the highest position in the graph, and it realizes 370 grams per passenger. Furthermore, the grams of CO2 of the passenger cars have 130 grams for per passengers. Moreover, the proportion of the buses owns 70-gram; the lowest position is the coaches in graph by traveler. In the sameness, the percentage of the maritime and the rail achieve 50 grams.
A more detailed looked at the pie chart shows both of the roads and the railways the higher more than the others. Following by the pie chart, the percentage of the public transportation owns 10%; meanwhile, the ports and the unknown have 2% for capitals spending. Moreover, the proportions of the inter modal, the percentages of the inland waterway and the airports have sameness of the percentages.
Ultimately, the report of the graph of the air becomes the highest position. Meanwhile, the proportion is the lowest position of CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union.
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Sentence: In the sameness, the percentage of the maritime and the rail achieve 50 grams.
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Sentence: Following by the pie chart, the percentage of the public transportation owns 10; meanwhile, the ports and the unknown have 2 for capitals spending.
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 209 200
No. of Characters: 1041 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.981 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.908 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.457 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.67 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
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